lightning never strikes twice

WALT use adjectives and similes to describe a setting clearly

The windmill is dark as night when I run inside to hide, I find a torch but it has know batteries in it, I search around for some when unexpectedly I hear a crackle in the sky followed by a boom. The lightning is carrying fire after it drops on the green but dark grass it heads in a line towards the windmill and burns the door I see the fire witch is as blazing as the sun. I run up to the top of the windmill as fast as i can where i find batteries with stuff coming out of it from the lightning when i saw those batteries i knew there was lightning that had been there so i stood there hoping that the fire would go away hoping that the lightning would stop and then all of a sudden a strike of lightning comes faster then sound and lands right next to me when this happens twenty bricks fall down some of witch scrape my face and almost knock me out i climb out on the bricks that had fallen and jump out of the windmill i crawl away hoping to never come back there again i crawl all the way back to town and never saw that place since.